English Practice Now

Avoiding the "I will" structure

Weak Thesis

Strong Thesis

 

This essay will discuss three causes of pollution.

 

 

I will first explore the definition of cheating, then I will explain the causes and the effects.

 

 

We will investigate the history, then we will look at the controversy, and finally we will look at possible solutions.

 

 

Pollution is caused by agriculture, transportation, and manufacturing.

 

The causes and consequences of cheating provide a clear image of its nature.

 

 

Understanding the history of the problem as well as the controversy around it enables a clear image of the possible solutions to take.

 

Weak Thesis

Strong Thesis

Uses “I” 

 

I will explain why Indigenous issues affect us...

Uses “it” and direct statements to show opinion

 

Indigenous issues affect us…

Uses “will”

 

This paper will cover the impact of the pipeline.

 

States the argument you are making

 

The pipeline has many impacts, including…

Tips to Avoid This Structure

Review the tips to avoid the “I will” structure with this example: 

I will discuss three reasons why cars are bad for the environment.

Use “it” phrases It is clear that cars have a negative impact on the environment due to... It is essential that the government find alternatives to cars due to... Use noun phrases and prepositions Due to __, __, and ___, cars need to be removed from daily routines. Use "there are" There are three negative consequences of using cars, including.... Use "should because" Cars should be banned because of the different ways they detract from our lifestyle, including...